Stylistic Points for Writing a History Paper

• Write in Third Person.

In other words, avoid using words like "I," "my," and "you." Because you are the author of the paper, readers will assume opinions offered in the paper are yours; there's no need to emphasize this by using first person. For example--

NOT: I believe the author's use of detail helps readers understand life in the 1800s.
BUT: The author's use of detail helps readers understand life in the 1800s.

• Use Active, not Passive, Voice.

Your paper will be the most clear and easy to read if you always state who/what is doing the action at the beginning of your sentences. Take a look:

NOT: This book was written for the general reader. (Who wrote the book?)
NOT: This book was written for the general reader by Bob Laureate. (Why hold out until the end?)
BUT: Bob Laureate wrote this book for the general reader.

• Avoid Beginning a Sentence with "This."

Many times if you start a sentence with words like "this" and "that," it is unclear what these words refer to. It's better to be specific, even if it may seem like you're repeating yourself.

NOT: The author included many first-hand accounts of slavery in the article. This helps readers empathize with the slaves.
BUT: The author included many first-hand accounts of slavery in the article. These song lyrics and testimonials help readers empathize with the slaves.

L. Frega
CLC Writing Center